UNO hits me

Once upon a time I was playing UNO with my friend Allie. All of a sudden the cards hitting me.
It was so werid!? I ran into the closet downstairs. The cards cut through the door.!!!! I was sooooooooooooo scared. I ran to see how Allie was doing. She was hurt. I' m talking bad hurt. I called 911.!!!! I told tem UNO cards where chasing me they laughed and hung up. Then I called the military. They said this is serious!! Are UNO cards really chasing you? YES!! Why would I call you if they weren't. 5 seconds later a clown arrivied and shoved a pie in my face!!!! Then the miltary arrivied with water guns!!! they sqirtied the cards and they fell on the ground. Catherine wake up said Allie!!!!!!! I was sweating like a goat. There was a tub of cookies in front of me. The cookies must have gave me a nightmare.




10 years later I heard a voice saying "it wasn't a dream"

It is pretty well written, just work on grammar and punctuation.

Sry i was working fast. and thx for compilment.I just love writing

Catherineh11 wrote:Sry i was working fast. and thx for compilment.I just love writing

Me too! You should really read my story here.

Ok i will read your story

Catherineh11 wrote:Ok i will read your story

YAY!!! Please reply to it too.

Good story but you need better grammer sis

Ok sry i was in a rush